Very interesting read! There's a lot of stylistic uniqueness to this, in how it's put together and in character design. It definitely was a breath of fresh air from the monotony of a lot of other VNs out there at the moment. My only critique would be to work on your typos but, otherwise, incredible work to crank out in a month! Hope to see more from you.
Thanks for all the kind words! :) It was a primary goal of mine to create something that challenges the usual flow of more traditional romance VNs. Not that those don't have their merit. But I also think there's plenty of room for this community to welcome in other types of "weirder" relationships/romance dynamics.
I haven't gotten around to Scavenger yet, but Lavender Town is a favorite of mine for that very reason as well! It's got such a wonderfully unique style to it :)
I've been working hard on releasing a second Chapter for this. Which will also fix all of the typos in this jam version because, woof, yeah... there's quite a few. The perils of doing an entire game in a month haha.
I really enjoyed this story, I loved the exquisite sex scene and the way that "stinkbrain" is depicted, that incredible reckless abandon and deep fulfilling primality, is dead on. It really struck a chord with me and I really hope you make more chapters! Fantastic work!
Thank you!! I'm glad it resonated with you so much! The whole "pseudo-hypnotic/primal" effect that Caine experiences during the scene is a bit personal for me, so it's great to hear that other's experience similar feelings.
Chapter 2 is currently in the works! No telling if it will pan-out exactly. But I have plenty more ideas on how to make this 'yote even smellier. ;3
I really appreciate the encouragement!! I'll do my best to keep it going. :)
I'm definitely aiming for something a bit... against the norm here writing-wise. Which might not be everyone's thing. But it's nice knowing there's still people who can enjoy it despite all that raw intensity haha.
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Very interesting read! There's a lot of stylistic uniqueness to this, in how it's put together and in character design. It definitely was a breath of fresh air from the monotony of a lot of other VNs out there at the moment. My only critique would be to work on your typos but, otherwise, incredible work to crank out in a month! Hope to see more from you.
Thanks for all the kind words! :) It was a primary goal of mine to create something that challenges the usual flow of more traditional romance VNs. Not that those don't have their merit. But I also think there's plenty of room for this community to welcome in other types of "weirder" relationships/romance dynamics.
I haven't gotten around to Scavenger yet, but Lavender Town is a favorite of mine for that very reason as well! It's got such a wonderfully unique style to it :)
I've been working hard on releasing a second Chapter for this. Which will also fix all of the typos in this jam version because, woof, yeah... there's quite a few. The perils of doing an entire game in a month haha.
Loved the Stinky :3
I really enjoyed this story, I loved the exquisite sex scene and the way that "stinkbrain" is depicted, that incredible reckless abandon and deep fulfilling primality, is dead on. It really struck a chord with me and I really hope you make more chapters! Fantastic work!
Thank you!! I'm glad it resonated with you so much!
The whole "pseudo-hypnotic/primal" effect that Caine experiences during the scene is a bit personal for me, so it's great to hear that other's experience similar feelings.
Chapter 2 is currently in the works! No telling if it will pan-out exactly. But I have plenty more ideas on how to make this 'yote even smellier. ;3
This was really good! Xou have a great talent for describing scenes; very colourful ☺️
Thanks for the kind words!
Glad to hear you enjoyed reading it :)
Loved the Stinky ... :)
You've got to keep writing this stuff. God, it's so raw and unique, holy shit. Well fucking done.
I really appreciate the encouragement!! I'll do my best to keep it going. :)
I'm definitely aiming for something a bit... against the norm here writing-wise. Which might not be everyone's thing. But it's nice knowing there's still people who can enjoy it despite all that raw intensity haha.
Liked it in an odd way. Interesting world and all, hope he gets to meet the dude's ma.
Thank you!! I do have more written-out, so we'll see what happens in the future... :)
I really liked it, very intriguing.
Thank you! ^^ Glad you think so!